I like how recognizable it is. If I were playing and saw this from a 3D Perspective this is how I would generally imagine it but putting it in in pixel form gives it a tone that makes it feel more like the game rather than a real life event. As far as the heavy black on the right side I wouldn't have changed anything because it could have actually made it look less like the judgement screen. It makes everything pop a bit more in my opinion. I think the tile is the only thing that throws me off because I think more could have really helped it but at the same time the pixelated detail makes it even more complimenting to the rest of it.
I love it amazing job 5/5!